Uploaded by hampshire - 3 comments - Topic: Amusement Parks (5 months ago)
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Amusement Parks (5 months ago)
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 3 months ago:
Maybe crop the mother out altogether and leave the blonde hair and waving hand - personally, I like the black and white.
Cheers,
Jon
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree that cropping the mother's face out and increasing the contrast would help. The crop will also showcase the two boys making very different faces.
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I love the moment, the expression. Just not sure of this treatment for this subject. Color would emphasize the moment, the context. Stronger tonal range, more contrast would emphasize the action and excitement of the moment. Also, a bit of a shame about cutting the mother's head in half.