The upper part of this image is not that attractive with the gray sky. I would crop this to a square keeping all the bottom. I tried it with the scroll bar and it looks much nicer, imo. This shot would have worked better with a higher aperture setting resulting in a deeper DoF, might have needed a tripod or a higher ISO setting. The flowers in the foreground really need to be in focus.

Nice subgect and composition but technic is very poore!

Good effort and well seen - take Clyde's very helpful critique to heart and re-shoot if you can - you are on the right track!

Best,
Jon

Definitely has the potential to be a beautiful photo. The lower flowers would be great if they were in focus, and the sky is a little blown out, but a re-shoot would the suggestions made by others would really help this picture out.

Thanks, I was worried about the foreground too, actually, but I didn't think it was that bad.

I'll see if I have a better shot on negative, but I'm also going to re-shoot it today.

Thanks for all of your comments.

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