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Uploaded by mikeock - 6 comments - Topic: Cars (3 months ago)  


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JimiThing (Jim Machajewski) added a critique 3 months ago:

Great car, but my problem with this shot is the composition. The fin is cut off at the top and the tailight is out of frame. Also, overall shot seems a bit dark. I am pretty sure the color of this car is a brilliant yellow and this photo doesn't seem to portray that honestly.

mikeock (Mike Adams) said 3 months ago:

Thanks for the comment Jim.
Hindsight, i noticed the cut off fin.
The color is due to underexposing to get it without any highlight clipping. I probably could remap the colors for a more pleasing solution....

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:

I agree about the composition, but as I see the trunk is open, a looser compo might not have been that attractive either. Beautiful tones, beautiful car!!

mikeock (Mike Adams) said 3 months ago:

Thanks for the comment Clyde!
Great ideas for the next round!

stilfoto (Stefan Nielsen) added a critique 2 months ago:

I would acturally prefer to cut it a little more in the top - to get rid of the trunk door. And then I would crop it close to the taillight too. This gives a cleaner composition imo. And the colors could use a little more punch...

mikeock (Mike Adams) said 2 months ago:

stilfoto,

Thanks for the comment and suggestions!

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