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Uploaded by hampshire - 4 comments - Topic: Gardens (1 month ago)  


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sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 1 month ago:

I love the colours of this shot. But I think the scene is to busy up high and a little emty in the lower part. The flowers and flag don't fit together. However the background in the lower part is busy too, I don't know where too look. My brains know the flowers and it's stem is the actual subject, my eyes want to look to elswhere.

I like the composition of the three flowers in a row and rising from down to high. Maybe it is an idea to choose an angle so you can just photograph the row of flowers with only a blue sky behind it, instead of other subjects. Use of DOF with only the flowers in focus, is another posibility.

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Tamara

boyd added a critique 1 month ago:

The individual components are good, but they don't quite fit tightly enough to make a strong composition. That said, I still think that has more good features than not and I do very much like the colours that you have captured (reflects good control over exposure across the frame). The longer I look, however, the more I like it overall.

hampshire said 1 month ago:

As always...thanks for your help...I have learned so much from you all.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 month ago:

I agree with the others. I would also add that the tonal range is a bit thin.

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