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Uploaded by Beamer - 8 comments - Topic: Duo (5 months ago)  


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soreks (Fedor Soreks) added a critique 5 months ago:

This is nice capture and even 2 duos :).

On a critique note, I'd mention 2 girls on the background cluttering otherwise appropriate centered composition.

As for the light, it looks too cold and flat in my eyes.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 5 months ago:

Yep, very cloudy day, but very interesting subjects. These two went on and on for almost 45 minutes doing handstands and cartwheels. I had to admire their energy (if only from the comfort of my beach chair)!! They appeared to be young, very enthusiastic gymnasts.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 5 months ago:

Very intriguing subject matter to be sure, Clyde. The two bathing beauties on their way in are definitely a distraction for me, however. A pleasant distraction, granted, but they do diminish the impact of the photo as a whole. The lighting, in my view, is just right for this kind of a shot; it's not a landscape, and brings out the geometry of your young gymnasts.

Best,
Jon

Ana (Ana Cortez) added a critique 5 months ago:

come on dude. with your skillz, you could have totally taken out those babes in the background.
;)

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 5 months ago:

Yep, but they're "babes"...

aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 5 months ago:

I gotta agree. When it comes to "clutter" this is a fine example. However, I would have removed them from the scene, too (he says wistfully).

kseniaC (ksenia) added a critique 5 months ago:

great capture!
but as others have said..
the ppl in the bak really take away from the subject at hand..
but really great shot either way!

lightningPaul (Paul) added a critique 5 months ago:

Very nice catch of the girls in front, the figure they make is very nice.

Points for improvement in my view:
- the two girls in the back are disturbing, it was better to wait till they were gone
- perhaps I would have lowered my point of shooting - a larger aperture to blur the sea more
a bit by laying on the beach
- the lighting is a bit dull; off camera flash to light the figure would have helped, though it is not so easy to do that unless you walk around with a light stand and other stuff :-)

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