This is a great idea for this topic.
I don't like the fact that the stair is tilted to the left and the girl on top destroys the linear power

I agree, it's a simple but nice ande suiteble object for this topic. The bright colours of the abc and the gray stairs gives it a nice contrast.
I think I would like this picture more if I could see the top ending of the stairs. I would give more attention to the little girl. Maybe it was a nice idea to photograph her while she was on one of the first steps.

Yes, I noticed the tilt after I uploaded. I could have fixed it had I noticed it before! Thank you for the ideas!

Good idea, but the execution is not quite there. So - it's still interesting!

Best,
Jon

I love the idea but in my opinion, the composition is a bit off. I think a bit of straightening, and slight shift to the right would've worked much better. I actually like the inclusion of the child though. I think it adds some quirky interest.

I like the light and the idea. I wish the little person was more central.

The next time I get back to this place, I'm going to rework the shot. Thank you all for the tips. So, I think move the shot to the right to show more of the width of the stairs, try to increase the height, and get my daughter to cooperate and be slightly more centered (that'll be a challenge for a 2 and a half year old). Thanks for the ideas, all.

i like the idea it fits perfectly to the topics.
perhaps the little girl would have been much interesting in another place of the shot (ex : down the stairs)