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(5 months ago)
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gazdi (Csaba Bobák) added a critique 4 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 4 months ago:
Nice one, as Casba said, it does have strong impact/interest. The tones are great, very sharp. I too am a bit bothered by the top framing so tight to her head, but it's a small thing. Overall, quite nice.
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 4 months ago:
Yeah a better top-framing would make a huge improvement.
boyd added a critique 4 months ago:
I agree with all the positive comments above. I like the fact that this could be a beach in so many places and that it carries with it so many emotions. Well done.
erinelizzybeth (Erin) added a critique 4 months ago:
This is a very well done picture. I really like it!
sambhara (Michael Bogdan) added a critique 3 months ago:
Great photo, taking the shot from down below with a wider angled lens really gives the photo the feel of innocents and wonderment. All in all its a wonderful photo.
TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 3 months ago:
amazing shot... looks like it tells a story
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Featured after 25 days and then it got critique request. I suppose you're curious why people gave you the star.
They are right, this stands out. Great and brave composition and a nice moment, and good bw conversion. Everything is in here. But go through step by step.
During expo and BW conversion you created nice and natural skin tones and a bright area where they go, good points. Two hard decisions in composition: cutting right above her head makes her even more important part of the image and tilting the horizon emphasizes the feeling of movement, more good points. One small remark here: I'd like to see a tiny space above the head, I find the crop a bit too tight there. About the moment: everyone knows this well enough to feel it and you presented in a subjective way.
Overall, very well done, Camp.