Since this subject is self-portraits, I find myself wishing you were the only subject in the photo - I find my eye drawn more to the female because of the lighting. (I am assuming by your name that you are the male!) Maybe a bit more light on your face would make you stand out more and make me feel the you were more the subject of the photo. Otherwise, I love the look you have on your face!

I agree with Sher about the subject. Anyway, nice look on you face. And interesting place, looks like a pub, but also could be a home. Very cool.

What I really like about this picture is the way you've included yourself in a scene. There's a lot going on around you, while you're focused on the camera, like if you were not concerned, and people not concerned about you. You can imagine a lot of stories... I like the warm light of the room, but I wish you had a better lighting on your face and a better contrast.There's a couple of disturbing spots. I'd also like to see the lady's hand.

I also like the scene, it's as if whats going on in the background is a portrait of you. Their is just a strange spot above her head that is bothering me but otherwise, Well done.