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by lightholder
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mrsmorunion (Tammy Runion) added a critique 1 year ago:

Why not post photos of your own children...they're beautiful. The expression on her face is delightful.

mizztech (Maria Little) added a critique 1 year ago:

Is this your daughter? If she is.. what a beauty, full of life! the colours are great and well treated!!

TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 1 year ago:

beautiful photo... what a cutie! The colors are great! well done

Onepixelshy (Mike) added a critique 1 year ago:

This photo really stands out to me. The color and composition is really pleasing. These are the type of photos I hope to capture of my kid. What type of processing do you do? Great work!

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) said 1 year ago:

Thank you everyone. I was a bit unsure about the framing, but since it was a candid, it came sooc cropped that way, so what can you do?

Onepixelshy, this was a raw image and I used adobe raw to boost the saturation on the blue and red channel, along with a few other tweaks in shadows and contrast. I have a preset for it which I use on a few different photos. I'd be happy to send it you if you like. :)

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by dcannaday
2 comments

Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:

Bonsoir dcannaday, il me semble que son oeil droit est trop sombre (en tous cas depuis mon écran). La bande de lumière au-dessus de lui me gêne aussi. Tu devrais pouvoir la refaire avec une meilleure lumière et dans un autre milieu. A la prochaine.

Good evening dcannaday, it seems to me that its right eye is too dark (in any case since my screen). The band of light above him obstructs me too. You should be able to remake it with a better light and in another medium. With the next one.

diezel99 added a critique 1 year ago:

What a precious capture. Nicely done.

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by athamanass
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Pixim (Eric) said 1 year ago:

Je ne sais pas si cette photo est bien à sa place dans ce topic. Mais par contre, j'aime la diversité des thêmes abordés. Et cette petite main la rend très intéressante.

I do not know if this photograph is well in its place in this topic. But on the other hand, I like the diversity of subjects approached. And this small hand makes it very interesting.

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by aloha_photo
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Pixim (Eric) said 1 year ago:

J'aime beaucoup la construction et le sujet.Cette photo me raconte une histoire. A la prochaine.

I like much construction and the subject. This photograph tells me a history. With the next one.

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by kisak
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Pixim (Eric) said 1 year ago:

J'aime beaucoup cette photo. Le traitement utilisé lui donne beaucoup de force (un petit regret tout de même sur le vignettage et le flou sur l'eau de la vague en bas à droite) le grain rajoute de l'angoisse sur le fond vers lequel nous sommes amené.

I like very much this photo. The used treatment gives her a lot of strength (a small regret all the same on the vignettage and the vagueness on the water of the wave below to the right) The bead adds of the fear to the horizon towards which we are brought.

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by Beamer
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mizztech (Maria Little) added a critique 1 year ago:

nice silhouettes against that beautiful sky..
the only thing to mension for me is the composition, I would of placed the plants a little mor to the left..

Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:

Bonsoir (pour moi) Beamer, comme mizztech, je trouve original ces silhouettes épineuses sur ce ciel bien capté. Je suis gêné par cette masse rocheuse à droite qui m'empêche d'avoir de la profondeur. A la prochaine.

Good evening (for me) Beamer, like mizztech, I find original these thorny silhouettes on this well collected sky. I am obstructed by this rock mass on the right which prevents me from having depth. With the next one.

leaves added a critique 1 year ago:

the rock on the right is slightly distracting, but overall a very nice thorny silhouette, good shot.

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) added a critique 1 year ago:

good lokks great;)

marcouet52 (Mario Arcouette) added a critique 1 year ago:

Just like it as it is,very nice sky

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by dreamer247
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boyd added a critique 1 year ago:

Very well composed and exposed shot. However, I am wondering what it would look like with less depth of field to make the subject "pop" and make the figures in the bottom left a little less distracting.

jcniguez (José Carlos Ñíguez) added a critique 1 year ago:

Fotografia interesante con un excelente encuadre . Para mi gusto habría dado prioridad a la abertura de diafrágma disminuyendo la profundidad de campo. Excelente contraste y muy acertado su viraje a sepia. ¡Enhorabuena, gran "disparo"!

dreamer247 (Ben Godkin) said 1 year ago:

Thank all of you for your comments.

The original shot was all in focus. I added a slight blur to the background to simulate a smaller F-Stop. This was the ONLY shot I got of her. I gave her some money and gestured to the camera, then took the shot. I didnt want to go to far on the blur because it might look a little artificial but it could use a little more.

Taken at 12mm wide angle!

mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 1 year ago:

Wow.
Very nice.
The toning is wonderful.
The use of the Colosseum in the background is awesome.
Wonderful job with the blur.
It does look very natural!

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 1 year ago:

This is a once in a lifetime photo. Fantastic capture.

It appears as though the soft focus is oversaturating the shadows slightly. I can see how dropping the blur might make the photo too busy with all the texture you have captured. Have you considered maybe creating a radial mask and then pulling down the contrast as is reaches the edges? Could be an alternative way to bring the impact back to the subject...

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by Beamer
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Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:

Bonjour Beamer,je trouve que la composition est bonne. Ton traitement est intéressant et bien réalisé.Néanmoins, la transition entre le sombre et la lumière aurait pu être plus douce (facile à dire).Peut-être en baissant les Isos.1/320 avec Iso 400. Salutations et à bientôt.

Hello Beamer, I find that the composition is good. Your treatment is interesting and realized well. Nevertheless, the transition enters the somber and the light shall have been able to be sweeter (easy to say) to .Maybe by lowering Isos.1/320 with Iso 400.
Greetings and goodbye.

boyd added a critique 1 year ago:

I think this is an interesting treatment of the subject and fits with the theme perfectly. Very difficult exposure situation handled thoughfully - I like the way the detail of the tiles looms out of the darkness to reveal the detail.

aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the composition here. Ordinarily I would be tempted to crop out some of the dark foreground, but not in this case. All that weight grounds this image and lets the reflections have center stage. The lighting situation you face in this one is demanding and well handled. It's easy to stare at this photo because there is a surprising amount to see when you take a moment. I can't decide whether this is a composite or single image. Well done, either way.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 1 year ago:

Single image, just a little cc, including a gradient map, a little cropped off the right. Thanks again Jeff for you thoughtful comments. Thanks also boyd and Eric.

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nicely nicely done. I would have thought this was a composite as well as the exposure looks tricky. And the negative space is perfect for framing the subject.

Simply beautiful.

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by marcouet52
2 comments

Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:

Bonjour Marcouet52, l'opposition des deux plantes principales est intéressante. Peut-être que tu aurais pu ouvrir plus afin que la plante à droite soit bien nette. Un petit détail, je suis gêné par la coupure des deux feuilles à droite, ainsi que par le haut un peu en retrait pour le thême. Peut-être une prise de vue de plus haut aurait été plus judicieuse ?
Bonne photo et à bientôt.

Good morning Marcouet52, the opposition of both main plants is interesting. Perhaps that you would have been able to open more so that the plant to the right is very net. A small detail, I am embarrassed by the break of both leaves to the right, as well as by the top a bit standing aside for the thême.Perhaps a shot of more high would have been more judicious? Good photograph and see you soon.

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) added a critique 1 year ago:

the motive is cool but i think theres something missing... i dont know... perhaps maybe a bit blur... or a bloom effekt. but the motive is really good ;)

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by MMeye
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Pixim (Eric) said 1 year ago:

Bonjour MMeye, j'aime beaucoup.Le rendu de la matière est très bien géré.Tu as pris des risques sur l'exposition et au final cela rend très bien.Sur le cadrage, le côté complétement à gauche laisse apparaitre le pli de la chaussure et me gêne un peu.Peut-être aurait-il fallu élargir le plan.
Très belle photo, à la prochaine.

Good morning MMeye, I like very much. The returning of material is very well managed. You took risks on exhibition and in finale it is very well productive. On framing, side to the left appear lead the crease of the footwear and bothers me a bit. Perhaps it would have been necessary to enlarge plan.
Very nice photograph, in next.

MMeye (Martine) said 1 year ago:

Merci Eric. Concernant le côté gauche : A cause du lacet c'était difficile de faire plus serré, mais tu n'as pas tort.

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