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MatthNice (Matthias Delouche) added a critique 11 months ago:

Salut Pumb, belle ambiance, jolie photo. En ce qui concerne les critiques: il y a un halo autour du dome des invalides (il faut utiliser le plugin "contrast mask"). La photo semble aussi pencher un peu à droite.
Sinon le traitement lui va bien.

BISOUS PUMB. A +

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 11 months ago:

Nice Eric. The lighting situation was obviously difficult. Looks like you did a matte around the church to separate the foreground and sky. The halo around the steeple is a little noticeable.

boyd added a critique 11 months ago:

I think that the composition of this shot is really strong. First is the focus on the prominent tree in the foreground, your eye drifts down the rows and you find the church which is the perfect balance of the main tree. Nice use of a "base" here as well. If I wanted for anything it would be a little more sharpness in the overall shot, particularly the main tree, but this is very minor.

Pixim (Eric) said 11 months ago:

Thank you for your opinions, I try to develop with Capture Nx (Nikon) and to use the U-points, I have progress to make (indeed, the halo is too visible)

@Matth Oui ça penche, mais les "invalides" m'ont rendu fou, j'ai l'impression qu'il penche à gauche. Promis j'arrête tout d'ici peu.
Greetings.

jasonkravitz (Jason Kravitz) added a critique 11 months ago:

great colors and composition. To avoid the halo, you may be able to create two layers and carefully paint one on top of the other. A bit of an an intensive process but a good way to get rid of noticeable halo.

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 11 months ago:

Beautiful shot! My only thought is I wonder if cropping the top and bottom into more of panorama might help the impact? But it's only MHO. LOVE the colours. Where was that taken?

Pixim (Eric) said 11 months ago:

This shot was taken in Paris, they are "les invalides". Thank you for your comments and your councils.

Hanssie (Hans Stellingwerf) added a critique 7 months ago:

A well-known buidling but placed in another view (always nice to see that), you did a wonderful job ! The weather helped you in a nice way:-))

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