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Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 11 months ago:

Now that's a chain!! I like it. Very strong subject and your composition plays it up nicely.

3 complaints:
1. the highlights are blown out on the top of the wall
2. the saturation is so strong that the red reflections in the water are distracting
3. if you crop just a tiny bit off the top you won't see the end of the chain and then it will feel like it just goes on and on...

Cheers mate.

daldao added a critique 11 months ago:

There is only one thing that i want to say, the higlights, they are very high.
Good pic

Neuner added a critique 11 months ago:

I would like to see it cropped so you only see the chain and the blue water. I'd back off on the saturation or filter for the blue. The chain texture and lighting are excellent. I'd also hold back on some of the contrast. The chain shadow bleeds into the shadow on the water.

AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 11 months ago:

Tiene gran fuerza pero encuentro demasiada luz en el muro y parte superior derecha.

blaze883r (Fernando Bordallo) added a critique 11 months ago:

I like the composition very much. The chain's texture looks really rusty, but I think the contrast is too strong. The colors seems to be oversaturated, and shadows are shown as full black zones.

Good pic, after all! ;)

pouhou (Tony LUJIEN) added a critique 11 months ago:

I like the texture of the chain and the blue of the water (seems a litle bit oversatured) and the contrast in the shadow is also too strong.
A cropping too keep the chain the main subjet will propably increase the strenght of the picture.

so it's up to you

Pixim (Eric) said 11 months ago:

Thank you for your opinions and councils, I have the impression that I am me am let go (test of cross processing). Thank you still to be to you to stop on this image.

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