Uploaded by Pixim - 6 comments - Topic: Everyday Artifacts (6 months ago)
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sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 6 months ago:
photoaholic (Geoffrey Reynertz) added a critique 6 months ago:
very interesting shot, i like the dof. Tamara is right this shot is fascinating
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 6 months ago:
Very cool shot.
I like how two or so of the tongs are bent.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 6 months ago:
Eric,
I like this one. My only nit is with the upper right - the blown highlights of the yellow "stuff" take me out of the subject.
Best,
jon
Pixim (Eric) said 6 months ago:
Thank you with everyone for your opinions. Jon, you are right, these two luminous zones obstruct the reading of the image. I was especially afraid of a Dof too short, but this party taken is reasonable according to your reactions. Thank you still for your attention.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 4 months ago:
I agree with Jon the upper right corner is distracting and could easily be cropped out. What really bothers me is the arc of the base of the rake just touching the bottom edge of frame. Would be better with part of the handle showing or none of it.
Very nice take on an everyday object though.
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Hmmm... strange angle but it fascinates me!