Uploaded by Shockmotion - 7 comments - Topic: Nature (10 months ago)
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g_malong (G Malong) added a critique 10 months ago:
sunside (Markus van Dahlen) added a critique 10 months ago:
(Kennst ja meine Meinung bereits, aber doppelt hält besser ^^)
I actually like the centered arrangement. It doesn't look too static IMHO because of the asymmetric distribution of the trees in the center - you could even go further and say that it in fact would be a symmetric distribution if the car wouldn't replace a tree - which in turn gives the whole image a deeper meaning. (Think of global warming, and as you can see from the picture, the night is just beginning)
As for me, I feel that the trees at the right are a bit distracting. Just cover them with your fingers and you'll see what I mean. My idea would be to clone them out to keep the main subject in the center. (Either that, or some trees should be 'added' on the left.)
If you were to crop the image, I'd crop from the left because there's no information, but as I said, I like the balance that is there now (minus the trees on the right).
I totally like the strong silhouette as well as the low horizon. The two planes in the sky also add information and help to balance the composition. I'm usually not a big fan of non-standard crops, but this works particularly well. The colors are sweet, too. This looks like a nice evening if it weren't for the dark global warming story I made up above. :)
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) added a critique 10 months ago:
Very beautiful sky and colors. I don't mind the alignment so much, though I do think it would be a little better if the trees were off center. I also kind of wish the van was in-between the trees.
anemix (John Anderson) added a critique 10 months ago:
The hidden depth on the right side horizon, as well as the tree distribution makes cropping all the way from the left to the first tree a better comp for me. It also brings out the color banding a bit more. good capture, apparently there are a lot of possibilities from different perspectives.
DavidBaute (David Baute) added a critique 10 months ago:
wow.
Thats great.
Where is it?
kseniaC (ksenia) added a critique 9 months ago:
I personally love how the trees aren't perfectly distanced from one another, or perfectly spaced in the photo itself, it seems more natural. I absolutely love the silhouettes and how detailed they are, and the tones of the sky are beautiful!
jorgelopez (Jorge López) added a critique 8 months ago:
Great photo. I think you need just three trees and a more empty sky, specially for the airplanes, but you make a fantastic job!!!!
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Silhouette is great, but for me, it would be better if the trees are kinda off center (Rule of Thirds). But overall, the picture is great.
Just my two cents.