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Uploaded by camiels - 6 comments - Topic: Nature (5 months ago)  


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misu (Mikhail Palinchak) added a critique 5 months ago:

Good photo. Just a bit annoying background!

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:

The background is fine, the problem, imo, is the composition. You could easily crop this to a square and it would focus so much more attention on you main subject. There is way too much showing on the right of frame. If you crop out the whole right 1/4 or so it would be better.

sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 5 months ago:

I agree with Clyde. You could crop from the right, cutting the big blurry flower of the image. Perhaps would some cloning, to get rid of at least two of the most giant flowers on the background, on the left also make a less crowded impression.

A thing I like about the photo is the soft pink colour of the flowers with the purple background on top of the photo.

camiels (Camiel Schoonens) said 5 months ago:

Thanks for the constructive feedback! Never thought of cropping it into a square. Will do so in the near future.

treehuggerish added a critique 5 months ago:

It actually took a while before I discovered the bee. It is in its essence a very nice photo of a bee and a flower. Actually one of the better ones I've seen. What really hurts this image is, as others have noted, the cropping. Both the foreground and background makes it very hard to focus on the subject, so yeah! crop it and let us see it again... I'll bet it'll be a very nice photo then. I'd suggest a somewhat tight crop, try to get as much blue/green background and as little of the other flowers as possible.

AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 5 months ago:

Estando de acuerdo con lo expuesto, ayudaría si el insecto se mostrara de cara, pero es tan difícil, a veces, conseguirlo.....

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