
by tuscanice
11 comments
Paulforrester (Paul Forrester) added a critique 1 year ago:
byutanner (Jason Tanner) added a critique 1 year ago:
Having seen them both, I think I like this one more just to throw in a vote. Great job. Very creepy feel to the shot.
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
this is so much better than the other, but i think the same than before, better without the jewels
tuscanice (Jo) said 1 year ago:
Thanks everyone. Your critiques are much appreciated:)
dcrphotography (Daniel) added a critique 1 year ago:
Interesting effect but, I feel, it is overdone. The rings and fingernails do not bled at all with the unnatural looking fingers. MB if the color elements were oversaturated they would mesh better with the greyscale fingers.

by byutanner
7 comments
tuscanice (Jo) added a critique 1 year ago:
Your comp on this is perfect. Have you tried it in b&w with perhaps a diffused glow added? Well seen:)
nattfodd (Alexandre Buisse) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very nice composition but I agree that there is something awkward in the colours. Probably the fact that the sand, the log and the mountain have very similar tones.
I also think adding some green to the colour balance would help, since it's quite reddish at the moment.
B&W could also do the trick.
byutanner (Jason Tanner) said 1 year ago:
Thanks for the suggestions. I'll have to give that a try. Good thoughts. How would you add the diffused glow Jo?
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
to add the difuse glow, try to make a new layer of the hole image, give it a diffuse glow and after you do that, make a blending change and change the opacity until you get satisfied with the result.
This is my sugestion
byutanner (Jason Tanner) said 1 year ago:
Thanks all for the thoughts. I played around with it how you all mentioned (the BW and the difuse glow and different layering modes) and nothing really seemed that great to me. If anyone else wants to give it a shot feel free.

by derLitograph
1 comment
chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:
so good idea, is like the sun reflection i think, is it?

by clunkity
6 comments
23pixels (Rowell) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very interesting picture here. Lots of motion. Looks like the picture was taken at a dance.
clunkity (Dennis) said 1 year ago:
Thanks for the comments! This was actually taken at a fashion show.
Blumie (Sabine) added a critique 1 year ago:
This is a very interesting pic, something I did not see on the small version. I also like, how the DOF works on this. Great image - and where can I buy the skull thing?
Paulforrester (Paul Forrester) added a critique 1 year ago:
love the motion and DOF in this shot-nice one!
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
great contrast between skirts, so good motion sensation and a DOF.

by chromadreams
2 comments
ronjones (Ron Jones) said 1 year ago:
A unique vision. It has emotional appeal.
chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:
thanks Ron, that's just what i want to transmit.

by grayphotog
7 comments
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
i don't get detracted by the name but i miss the hole head of the man, in other way, i think that the bottle is the only thing that detracts me from the focus, it makes me look at the details insted of the hole image.
The colour is so great, that orange is incredible.
grayphotog said 1 year ago:
To me the bottle is very important, because it's a documentary photo. The monk has gone from house to house begging for his breakfast. Here you can see what he has to sustain him for the day. There is water and a glass, the pot with rice remaining in the bottom, and packets of food to eat with the rice. Someone else mentioned the angle; I angled slightly down in order to see into the pot. As for cutting off his head, that's something I often do. Are others bothered by that? Keep in mind, including the top of his head would mean seeing more to the left and right with more potential distractions. I come in close like this when I want a feeling of intimacy, like being there with the person.
zenith9 (Bob and Jeannie) added a critique 1 year ago:
The colours are very good but I think the intimacy of the picture could be improved by including all of the subjects head.
grayphotog said 1 year ago:
This reminds me that people who shoot in very close like this (right in front of him) often favor a 24mm lens. I was shooting at 40mm (24 x 1.6 crop factor). To have included his head I would have needed to move away. It would be better to get even closer with the 24 and do it. Anyone have a 5D to sell cheap?
mlberman25 (Miranda Berman) added a critique 1 year ago:
I also tend to crop the tops of heads off for a feeling of closeness. If the angle was lower to include his hair (what there is of it anyway) you would lose the focus on the ingredients and the pot would look too important... detracting from other details like the strength in his arms and his sense of calm concentration. I like it!

by Pya
6 comments
Pya (Pavithra Ram) said 1 year ago:
Thanks!
odon (Odon Dias) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like that swirl effect on the water. Simetrical reflections sometimes are difficult to deal with.
BSurprised (Behrooz) added a critique 1 year ago:
That is a very fine capture. That little mountain up there is a little bit disturbing, but it doesn't matter very much.
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
i think that the picture is so simetric, i wolud like it more if i only could see the clods in the water and nothing mor over the top of the trees, but in other way, the colours and saturation are, (for me), perfect
ronjones (Ron Jones) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very nice capture. Would be even better with some center of interest in the foreground.

by George
7 comments
reddave (David Parrish) said 1 year ago:
Beautiful shot!!, I love the web droplet shots, have plenty of my own but none this nice, I'd love to see the shot with the spide in focus also.
George said 1 year ago:
@reddave:
Thanks for the comment. The shot of the spider in focus is here:
zenith9 (Bob and Jeannie) said 1 year ago:
I think I prefer this one to the spider in focus shot. That was my first thought that the focus should have been on the spider but you don't get so much of the pearl effect of the water drops that really make this picture.
chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:
congratulations, it's the best pic of water effect i've seen in a long time, end the DOF effect is perfect.
congratulations again.
George said 1 year ago:
@chromadreams:
Thanks for your comment :-)

by George
7 comments
Hezron (James Chiang) said 1 year ago:
sooooo nice!
Thanks for sharing.
Peasap (Paul) said 1 year ago:
Great use of shallow DOF
THISMUG (Jeremy Yontz) said 1 year ago:
Awesome shot...such detail yet still mysterious and a little creepy
chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:
another greatfull shot.
George said 1 year ago:
:-)

by chromadreams
2 comments
mysight (Carl H. Sr.) said 1 year ago:
Good catch of that primal curve.
chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:
thanks a lot
Great concept, and a very unique shot! I like the fact that the hands lack detail-like Andrew, i am not sure about the rings (but i guess thats what makes it Duo!)
Awesome work!