i like the angle and the lights and in general i think is a good artistic shoot!!

nice colors. i like the lights in diagonal line. good job.

i don't know exactly what i see but i know i like it

This is very nice. I wish the streaks weren't so jagged. I wonder if there is any way to smooth them out without ruining the image??? The sky and the foreground water are great, wouldn't want to disturb them.

Nice shot, and good idea ;)

Interesting image, I like it - I like the engaging lines made by the path and continuation with open sky, really draws you in the image. The forest on both sides adds mystery.the b&w is fine.
I think Nick's recommendation regarding the crop is great !
like opening a wider door in your image..

I like it! B&W was definitely the right choice here, it makes much more graphic impact. And I agree with Nick, I would crop it higher also.

I agree with Nick with regard to the higher crop. If you crop it so the path appears to go on outside of the image it would be better.

Also try to clone out the little branch in the sky. With those two edits I think you would have a perfect image. The sky and the path complement each other perfectly. Good composition though and nice black and white conversion!
Thomas

i disagree with the crop idea. I think that letting me see the start of the path makes me even more curious to see where and how far it goes. I feel like its a metaphor for the start of a great journey and i dont know where it is taking me or how long it will last. B&W is very effective. Nice work.

I agree with Nick too. The little bit of dirt at the bottom draws my eye out of the picture.

It might be interesting to crop it down so the horizon is in the middle of the photo. It would put more emphasis on the lines going to infinity.

thanks for the comment men! This is the first comment I recieved here. Salamat po!

I like the composition and angle also.
And I agree with Geoffrey about the guy sitting in the back, to the right. He is pretty distracting to the main subject.

It seems that your camera's focus was somewhere around the woman standing on the left.

I don't know if you have manual settings on your camera, but if so, maybe try a pretty open aperture (for limited depth of field AND faster shutter speed), and see if you can get it to focus on the player in the foreground.

Good try. The subject is overexposed, and there are a number of distractions which steal our attention from the subject. I don't want to discourage - keep shooting and learn how to use your camera.

Best,
Jon

@phil and jon. Thanks a lot for your comments. I like them. I'm just a 3 month old photographer. The manual of the camera im using is in Korean language.

Again, thanks a lot for your encouragement. Really.

God bless you all.

Ruel

Ruel,

You're on the right track. Just keep "playing" with your camera and all its controls - find out what it will do well, and what it won't do so well! Keep taking pictures - this is the beauty of digital - take hundreds of photos every day if you can - really. Try to see as your camera sees - not an easy task.

Best,
Jon