good compo good angle, fits to the topics
it would perhaps be better if the guy was not there in the right bottom

thanks for the comment men! This is the first comment I recieved here. Salamat po!

I like the composition and angle also.
And I agree with Geoffrey about the guy sitting in the back, to the right. He is pretty distracting to the main subject.

It seems that your camera's focus was somewhere around the woman standing on the left.

I don't know if you have manual settings on your camera, but if so, maybe try a pretty open aperture (for limited depth of field AND faster shutter speed), and see if you can get it to focus on the player in the foreground.

Good try. The subject is overexposed, and there are a number of distractions which steal our attention from the subject. I don't want to discourage - keep shooting and learn how to use your camera.

Best,
Jon

@phil and jon. Thanks a lot for your comments. I like them. I'm just a 3 month old photographer. The manual of the camera im using is in Korean language.

Again, thanks a lot for your encouragement. Really.

God bless you all.

Ruel

Ruel,

You're on the right track. Just keep "playing" with your camera and all its controls - find out what it will do well, and what it won't do so well! Keep taking pictures - this is the beauty of digital - take hundreds of photos every day if you can - really. Try to see as your camera sees - not an easy task.

Best,
Jon