Uploaded by eggplant - 5 comments - Topic: Out My Window (1 year ago)
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Out My Window (1 year ago)
jaredwolf (Jared Wolf) added a critique 1 year ago:
uncommondepth (Roberta Murray) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the dof and choice of focus here. My complaint is that the image is a bit dark, and the lettering on the window sort of gets lost in the surrounding tones. I'm not really sure how you could have prevented that though. Perhaps using a slightly lower angle?
charmarie (Char) added a critique 1 year ago:
Definately the image could be lighter and the lettering my eye seems to get stuck on.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:
The low key of this image is nice, but it doesn't make the letters stand out. I personally do like the focus on the letters, which makes a nice distinction between inside and outside.
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 4 months ago:
Lighten up the dark end of the image. My eyes got stuck trying to read the sign because the detail was lost in the dark.
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My gut reaction to this photo was very positive. I get a feeling of being "stuck" inside, longing for the outside. Upon looking a little longer, I'm wondering about how reversing the focus to the outside scene would change the overall feeling...but I'm not sure it would be for the better...