
by refocus
5 comments
ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 7 months ago:
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 7 months ago:
Fun but scary, too! I agree with ryanopaz. I think it would be even nicer if there was more space on the top of the frame, and we could see more wrist.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 7 months ago:
Ryan, how do you crop the "lower left", can't crop a corner???
I looked at the with the scroll bar test to crop off the bottom just under the bit of shirt showing, can't decide which I like better. It's pretty darn good the way you have it.
I love the character of this, such a tough, hard subject captured with grace and flow, very nice!!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Love the light and lines! Beautiful!
Best,
Jon
Smooch added a critique 7 days ago:
Cool shot! Love the selective saturation in this one. Well done.

by lasiate
9 comments
eziler added a critique 7 months ago:
Nice composition with good texture and color.
smucha (shannon mucha) added a critique 7 months ago:
I agree with Beamer. Beautiful piece of art.
uncommondepth (Roberta Murray) added a critique 6 months ago:
Terrific work. The colors and form go so well together; and it has that Asian flair which I love so much. Simple but beautiful. If I were creating this image for print, I would lose the border and, of course, your watermark/name. Otherwise the image is perfect. Nice job!
joka (Johannes Kapp) added a critique 4 months ago:
Good work!
Afoklala (Jan Willem van Dormolen) added a critique 8 days ago:
I agree with the others. Maybe if you would transcribe your name into Japanese characters (Katakana)? That way you would have both the effect of Asian text and your name in the picture.
You could www.takase.com/Library/Glossary.htm#KATAKANA for this.
Lovely picture.

by Beamer
6 comments
lightningPaul (Paul) added a critique 2 months ago:
It fits the topic Blue very well. The lines from the windows and reflections are nice to look at. The reflected trees and the antenna totally at the right are a bit disturbing.
The more you look the more things and details you see. Well seen.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 2 months ago:
Thanks, Clyde...just what I needed to know - nice shot - thanks for posting. Great processing job.
Best,
Jon
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 2 months ago:
@jon, if nobody else is, I am watching...
boyd added a critique 1 month ago:
Great colour capture here, Clyde. The post processing also does a lot to help make an ordinary subject very interesting. Well seen and composed.
Smooch added a critique 15 days ago:
Interesting image Clyde. A nice departure from the other images I've seen you post here. I like the lines, color, and reflections in this one. I don't care for the tree reflections though. Not much you can do about that. Nice capture.

by misu
6 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 2 months ago:
Great capture and great work on this image.
Best,
Jon
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 2 months ago:
Very nice Mikhail!!
IKKENSALVA (Sal Mehtash) said 2 months ago:
Very, very nice!
gazdi (Csaba Bobák) said 1 month ago:
Wow, this is stunning.
bluechameleon (Sharon Wish) said 15 days ago:
Excellent! Well seen!!

by narnold
10 comments
mrsmorunion (Tammy Runion) added a critique 8 months ago:
Very cool photo! Great capture!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Nicely done!
Best,
Jon
hethmq (Heather Q) added a critique 7 months ago:
Nice capture!
The lines of the horizon and shore, along with the subject being slightly off centered really makes for a good composition.
op_perrin (Olivier Perrin) added a critique 3 months ago:
superbe, l'ombre et le saut, j'adore
Ana (Ana Cortez) added a critique 19 days ago:
ya just gotta smile when you see this shot.

by gurimehta
4 comments
trancho (Bob Trancho) added a critique 1 year ago:
I really like the idea here. I'd try cropping out the two end bars and selective sharpening the web to make it more the focal point ans see how that looks. Right now the bars demand a lot of your attention when it's the web that really is the subject of interest.
The background bokeh is good - soft with just enough definition.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 11 months ago:
I agree with cutting the outer bars. At the moment there are too many and it makes the picture too white. The light on the web is really beautiful and the green behind it makes a nice background.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Nice bokeh, nice light, but weak compostion, in my opinion. Interesting subject, but could be a much stronger photo with a little more work.
Best,
Jon
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 22 days ago:
This image needs to be straightened

by jvgphoto
8 comments
anagg (Ana Gonzalez Gaztelu) added a critique 6 months ago:
Bonita pero hay demasiada luz de fondo, me parece.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 6 months ago:
Clyde,
Weigh in on this if you have time - I really have mixed feelings about this effect - half the time I love it, and half the time I think it's really stupid and ultimately distracts greatly from the face of the subject. On the other hand, if I see it as something other than a traditional portrait...maybe it works on some level. Feel free to comment.
Later,
jon
photoaholic (Geoffrey Reynertz) added a critique 6 months ago:
i like this shot, nice use of light
very interesting face
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 6 months ago:
imo there's too much visible of the back of his head. It just isn't a 'en profile' shot, a couple of degrees counter-clockwise turning of the man and it would be all o.k.
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 22 days ago:
Awesome!

by Pixim
6 comments
Pixim (Eric) said 2 months ago:
Thanks hampshire ;)
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 2 months ago:
Beautiful work on this image - love it, Eric!
Best,
Jon
Pixim (Eric) said 2 months ago:
Thanks Jon, and glad that you like ;)
David_Rocaberti (David Rocaberti) said 1 month ago:
Great photo specially since this is a rather common motif. Good work
MMeye said 25 days ago:
Wow.. excellent! une "featured" bien méritée !

by willie_901
9 comments
lasiate added a critique 7 months ago:
pas facile ce genre de photos et celle-ci est bien réalisée. Manque un peu de piqué mais ce doit être le scan
hampshire added a critique 7 months ago:
Awesome! Reminds me of the Life Magazine Coney Island photo!
willie_901 (william) said 7 months ago:
Thanks everyone!
Hanssie (Hans Stellingwerf) added a critique 7 months ago:
Funny ! Busy too:-))
Neuner added a critique 30 days ago:
Brilliant!

by Beamer
8 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 1 month ago:
Yes, Noah, food stains.
boyd added a critique 1 month ago:
I like the composition that you have chosen here with the eyes smack bang in the middle of the frame. It works very effectively even with all the other colours and lines going on around her. Well done and seen.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 1 month ago:
Clyde,
Nice shot - there's a human being in your photograph! Question: how did you determine how to straighten this thing - you, obviously had several options...
Best,
Jon
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 1 month ago:
@jon, I don't remember fussing with the angle, that is right out of the camera. I cropped a little off the top trying to focus attention a little. This was shot at high iso and the D70s is not know for being very good at that, so I passed it through Noise Ninja and a little curves, that's it.
Neuner added a critique 30 days ago:
I like it however I would have liked to see more of the wall that she is peeking over. It would have given more of 'Peek'.
Fun shot and great framing, though I might crop just a touch from the lower left. There is a bit too much dead space for me. Otherwise, nice capture!