
by ties
5 comments
creative666 (Craig Wilson) added a critique 1 year ago:
I love the strong shapes and the grainy feel to this image, nice work!
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:
A sign in the wilderness.... This is very nice, I might push the contrast/grain and see if it makes it more dramatic. Might be cheating a little, but if it were me, I would try it without the power lines, just to see if the composition holds up..?
grahambo (Graham Siebe) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the picture. The composition, with the lines to give context, is great.
My only question is the topic. I don't have enough elements to begin pondering a story from. It feels more like still life. Very well executed still life.
nrcowlishaw (Nathan Cowlishaw) added a critique 1 year ago:
Good composition, my only dislike is the grain, or grain clusters. Overall it is a nice shot. The cross tied to the telephone pole is very emotive.
kokii (Dana K) added a critique 1 year ago:
nice, simple and powerful, like it

by Blumie
6 comments
Blumie (Sabine) said 1 year ago:
I try to follow your hints - but in fact, I do not know how. Those were the colors of thos middle age steps. What should be different?
Viper (Dan McMurray) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree. The lighting is so consistent and even, the image has no real "depth" to it. If you dodge and burn in places it may bring out the details...
lasiate added a critique 1 year ago:
its really flat but like that an approach of abstraction
diezel99 added a critique 1 year ago:
Fits the catagory and makes the viewer think and sometimes that's the idea.....well done.
kokii (Dana K) added a critique 1 year ago:
I would have tried to go a bit higher and try to include more curve of the stair to the image...just an idea

by augusto
1 comment
kokii (Dana K) said 1 year ago:
I like the idea a lot just maybe I would try to play with the composition and make it less symmetrical and I would also crop a bit the right side to get rid of those white stripes

by Blumie
11 comments
Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:
I think the grass color is fine actually... it IS an abstract...therefore it is meant to be...well, abstract. The enhanced colors fit well. Nice work!
Blumie (Sabine) said 1 year ago:
So my image is the prove, that tastes are different. I am happy, you like it.
shiningpig added a critique 1 year ago:
Me too. I like it! Very cheerful.
chefron (Ron Ernst) added a critique 1 year ago:
Color is great, Good visual appeal. Just a great photo.
kokii (Dana K) added a critique 1 year ago:
It took my interest immediately...like it

by Lindy
5 comments
chaba (David Chabashvili) added a critique 1 year ago:
Really nice textures here, but nothing more. It needs some center of attention, some movement or something where eye should travel in the end.
iagho (Alessandro Gho) added a critique 1 year ago:
I guess it is still a beautiful photo, with great tones and an unusual street-level angle. The defocused wall gives profundity to the composition, while the bricks in the front catch the attention with their perfect definition. A shot as simple as that, and yet a great one. Congrats!
Alex
lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 1 year ago:
Firstly, I have to say I love love love this photo, the textures and colours are gorgeous. Oddly however, I strangely found myself agreeing with the first comment. I found my eye sort of wandering back and forth aross it, looking for something to focus or rest on, as ifthere was something I couldn't see. I think it could benefit from the addition of a subject. If your intention was to make the bricks the subject, then they might beneift from filling the frame a bit more.
Or perhaps change the camera angle slightly to bring that little tiny tree a bit more into prominence, that would at least give the eye something to go to, and then can take in the rest of the scene.
Lindy (Lindy G) said 1 year ago:
thanks :):)
kokii (Dana K) added a critique 1 year ago:
Really nice texture and colours, like the combination of that blue wall and red bricks. I would try to exclude the white wall from the picture to make it a bit more abstract. But I also like it as it is.

by zenzi
2 comments

by philippe
5 comments
mysight (Carl H. Sr.) said 1 year ago:
Everybody in such a hurry!
schupin (Sylvain chupin) said 1 year ago:
I really like the colors and the contrast between people running all over and the others watching the map!
Nice shoot !
ArneG (Arne Gulstene) said 1 year ago:
Great blur - I might have even tried it with a longer exposure
philippe (Philippe Reichert) said 1 year ago:
Interesting remark, Arne, I had the same idea: I wanted a longer exposure, but it was handheld at 1/6e (I think) and I think it was the limit :o)
kokii (Dana K) said 1 year ago:
I like the contrast between sharp add in the corner and blur black silhouettes. it expresses nicely the hurry...

by psychodudu
1 comment

by adevrx
1 comment
kokii (Dana K) said 1 year ago:
like the simplicity, just the spot in the lower left corner might be a bit disturbing...
like the idea, I would shoot it from a different angle---but it's just a question of your author attitude:)