Uploaded by mikeock - 6 comments - Topic: Cars (2 months ago)
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Cars (2 months ago)
JimiThing (Jim Machajewski) added a critique 2 months ago:
mikeock (Mike Adams) said 2 months ago:
Thanks for the comment Jim.
Hindsight, i noticed the cut off fin.
The color is due to underexposing to get it without any highlight clipping. I probably could remap the colors for a more pleasing solution....
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree about the composition, but as I see the trunk is open, a looser compo might not have been that attractive either. Beautiful tones, beautiful car!!
mikeock (Mike Adams) said 2 months ago:
Thanks for the comment Clyde!
Great ideas for the next round!
stilfoto (Stefan Nielsen) added a critique 1 month ago:
I would acturally prefer to cut it a little more in the top - to get rid of the trunk door. And then I would crop it close to the taillight too. This gives a cleaner composition imo. And the colors could use a little more punch...
mikeock (Mike Adams) said 1 month ago:
stilfoto,
Thanks for the comment and suggestions!
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Great car, but my problem with this shot is the composition. The fin is cut off at the top and the tailight is out of frame. Also, overall shot seems a bit dark. I am pretty sure the color of this car is a brilliant yellow and this photo doesn't seem to portray that honestly.