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cezarl (Cezar Litu) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nice scene!
It would have been nice if you were one or two steps further back, to catch te old man's right leg completely, and to avoid that slight cropping of those people's heads....

TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 1 year ago:

Really nice photo... i agree... needs tobe a few steps back... love the b/w

kvalda (Doreen) added a critique 1 year ago:

i agree with cezarl for the cropping, but otherwise i really like the scene.
well seen!

boyd added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree with the previous comments, and would like to add that you have controlled exposure very nicely in an obviously challenging situation. I also find the fact that three of the subjects have their hands up for different reasons adds to the interest.

dcannaday added a critique 1 year ago:

Very interesting photo. So many different thoughts are going through my mind on each ones situation. Very well captured.

willie_901 (william) added a critique 1 year ago:

If this is not cropped, then it's perfect. You can't be too close. If it is cropped, I like the composition very much.

The young man's back is a bit blow-out (which may be your creative intent?) to me. I wish there was more shadow detail in his legs.

dreamer247 (Ben Godkin) added a critique 1 year ago:

The lighting in this shot is great . It adds a lot of texture. I think the tones are dead on.

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree with dreamer, the constrast is gorgeous. And I don't mind the cropping, I wouldn't have noticed his leg... :)

Come back to us... more photos please! How are you?

mizztech (Maria Little) said 1 year ago:

Hello to all of you and thank you for all them comments.. I appreciate this a loooot..

Now it's time for me to comment on your comments ;)

First of all, the picture isn't cropped.. I don't agree on the fact to take a few steps back because my main subject is the man who's sleeping, so that meens he can't be to close..

About the contrast, it's meant that way, I wanted it to be so dramatic.. cause I think the seen is pretty dramatic..

I took this picture in Barcelona when we where waiting for the bus.. the scene striked me, the guy was just sleeping there and the sun gave this beautiful paterns on the bench and especially on the guys back..
I think he is homeless or something, or drunk, don't know, but we saw a lot of guys just sleeping on the streets of Barcelona, during daytime and night..

What's funny or weird is that all them people are touching there face with there hands.. like they want to cover something..

What I don't like in this pic are the man's legs behind the guy with his baseball had on..

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