Uploaded by mooch - 7 comments - Topic: Fill the frame (2 months ago)
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Fill the frame (2 months ago)
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 2 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
I like this one better, has a nice flow. The 2 bits of green in the upper left still bother me, but, hey!, I'll get over it.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree with the above comments - I think cropping out the first two rows of boats could possible help you out a little bit, mainly to get rid of the tree on the upper left corner. I do like your color and the boats themselves are very interesting!
oz_sprog (Will Williams) added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree with Beamer, maybe crop out the green bits but otherwise the framing is really well done, great job :)
mooch said 2 months ago:
Well, the tree is has always been in the way. I don't know, if I crop the top two rows of boats I'm concerned that the balance of the image will be lost. Don't get me wrong the tree is a little annoying as it ruins the flow.
boyd added a critique 2 months ago:
This is a really interesting shot, mooch, and I think that I like it better overall than your other one of the same subject. It is funny though, the branch, wall and particularly the reflection of the sky between the boats tends to make this lose its tight "fill the frame" feeling for me. These other elements seem to give the impression of a really empty scene (albeit in a frame that is full - if you know what I mean). I think that it is a wonderful image, well done.
ApurvaMadia (Apurva Madia) added a critique 1 month ago:
Excellent job this. What a capture. On the flip side needs a 2 cm crop at the bottom. Try it and this is a masterpiece.
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I know... it's a 'fill the frame' but it gives me a turbulent feeling. I think the brench, the green area's (wich I read there was spoken about in a similar photo of you) and the wall in the upper right corner are not helping. Though, I think you did a nice job after all. I tried creating a fill-the-frame photo of myself for several times and I know it's hard to get a good one.