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Cars (1 year ago)
mosesport (Moses) said 1 year ago:
Did (Did) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like your treatment too.
But I wonder why you cut the car like this as you have enough angle to catch it entirely. Or maybe you should zoom-in more in order to cut right and top sides too (an with a tilt for giving more dynamics).
So bad for the sun reflector :(
grahambo (Graham Siebe) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the treatment too. It reminds me of HDR, but not in a "this was made with a computer" way.
I don't understand the crop though. It's almost like the sun protector in the window is the subject of the picture (it's central and high contrast).
I wish I could see more of the left side of the car. It would make it more clearly the subject of the picture.
I do like how the parking lines meet the top of the frame, but could loose the dead space to the right of the last one.
chefron (Ron Ernst) added a critique 1 year ago:
Would have been better if we could see the rest of the car.
mosesport (Moses) said 1 year ago:
It was my intention to leave part of the car out. IT makes people uncomfortable when something isn't complete. I like making people uncomfortable. Too many people are stuck in 'this is what makes a good photograph'. This is an amazing photograph to me. I know what's on the side of the car that's cut off. No one else does. That's makes it unique in my eyes. Knowledge is power. Thanks for all the comments! :)
.moses.
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with why you cut the car off.
Does make people wonder.
IMO to execute that properly, you should have also cut off the left head lamp. Currently, to me, it is a distraction as it is not complete and my eye is drawn to it.
Jordan (Jordan Young) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the composition, it's different. What an awesome lotus, you captured the color perfectly. I wish the sunshade wasn't in there, but unless it's your car you can't really control that. I would have also liked to see a little more of the side of the car so I could see the rims.
Great work.
chromadreams (David) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the treatment but not the croping, I would like it more viewing the whole car.
Ronaldus (Ronald van Beek) added a critique 1 year ago:
Great postprocessing!
If you can maybe you could crop out more from the left (leave the Lotus emblem in the frame)and add more to the bottom of the shot.
Giving it more space below and adding more strength to the compo.
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Added some grain and softened it up a bit. Looks a bit plastic. I rather like it.
.moses.