Nice tones! The subject is a little too centered, I think, and this results in a kind of static photograph. You could have achieved more energy through a different framing strategy. Just my two cents. Lovely job. Best, jon

I like the mystery of this image. The centered is OK for me, since the black line is somewhat more off-center. I do like all the yellow shades.

Tammy,

You know, as I continue to stare at this yellow thing, I think Nick may be right. Don't change a thing!

Thank you...this is actually two yellow walls with a hallway between, it's just that by taking advantage of the angle it actually gives it a rounded feel. The various shades of yellow came simply from the lighting above.

I keep coming back to this image to leave a comment, so I guess it does do something to me :). Very abstract. I Would have loved to see it a bit more off center though.

Thomas

yellow abstract interesting i love it (perhaps just a little bit too centered)

Very intriguing, you have a great eye!
I'm not sure whether I think it's too centered or not, the black line makes all the difference (as Nick says).
If you can go back to this interior, you could shoot it again and experiment with different compositions, maybe even a vertical format?
Also, it might be interesting to catch the silhouette of a person in the distance down the hallway - lots of potential for more great stuff!

good work!