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MMeye added a critique 1 year ago:

Very nice view. My only point is regarding the person on the right. On the one hand, he is useful as giving a scale to this impressive mountain. But on the other hand, he is too close of the border. Maybe you could have moved a little bit towards the right side when framing.

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) said 1 year ago:

well im soory i didnt realise that there were any persons...

MMeye added a critique 1 year ago:

:-))
Don't be sorry ! The more I watch your pic, the more I think this tiny person is really useful ;-)

LadyWings (Kara Brothers) added a critique 1 year ago:

The colors are wonderful. The only thing I might do is straighten the horizon of the water, a bit.

LadyWings (Kara Brothers) added a critique 1 year ago:

In doing so, it would also eliminate the questionable person. If you have Paint Shop Pro XI, this is very simple to do.

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) said 1 year ago:

i use photo shop cs 2 where it is also quite easy, but then would also be the sky cropped, and i donts want that^^

boyd added a critique 1 year ago:

I look at this shot and think "wow", but that isn't helpful critique. I have no problem with the water not being a flat horizon because the shoreline is so uneven it is very difficult to know were flat is. The detail that you have captured in the mountain top and the trees in the midground is wonderful.

sgresnic (Sandy) added a critique 1 year ago:

Did you crop out other people, or even just some more room on the right? I think I'd prefer to see either no people, or have them be a little more prominently placed on the right side of the image. I like that the people provide the scale, but right now it seems more like something caught in the picture by accident. Seeing more of them might make it seem more purposeful.

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) said 1 year ago:

well it more an accident^^ but well they have something where gives you an imagine how big it all was^^ see it like you prever: as an accident or as an nice detail or as something disturbing ;)

PhotoDaniels (Stephanie Daniels) added a critique 1 year ago:

I love this! It's beautiful! There isn't much I'd critique. The person just adds to it - so you can do two of one things. A.) Add a speech bubble that says "Hi Mom!" or B.) crop him out. Ha ha! I joke! I joke!

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