Very nice atmosphere. Love they b/w and grain.

It has a very sad atmosphere for me. It is like "those days are gone" - maybe since the kids have their playstation today ... But I think you captured that sad story very well, so I still see it as a winner.

bastian: thanks, this is actually just a scan of a print i developed myself

blumie: it's interesting that you say that, because i'm only just 17 myself, so i guess it's cool i was able to fine such a...mature view point

Let me tell you - as a 36 year old - sometimes you are with 17 years more adult than others. No matter what happens, thats fine as long as you do not forget how important it is to be childish!

Very nice. This photo invokes emotion.

You are developing a style. You have a good eye. Keep it up! Keep shooting/developing/printing.

You should try and clean things up a bit with regard to your developing/film drying technique. The hair/threads and other blemishes have to go. Otherwise, these prints are good. Don't despair. It just takes practice. You may enjoy the following forums where you will find tips from others who develop their own B&W film:

www.rangefinderforum.com

and

www.apug.org

Whatever feedback you may receive, don't fret about technical criticism from people who have never touched or looked through a B&W negative.

Nice picture. And nice work. You might want to try dodging the center of the sign ever so lightly but other than a bit of cleaning I wouldn't chage anything else.