
by lasiate
3 comments
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 8 months ago:
Gruesome but oddly compelling...
Ana (Ana Cortez) added a critique 8 months ago:
trying to figure out what part of the body this actually is.....
TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 8 months ago:
what part of the body is that? Is that person bleeding? Odd.

by jvgphoto
9 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 8 months ago:
Wow, I didn't think anyone would pick up on that - you were actually looking!
Cheers and thanks!
Jon
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
Don't need a window, that's what it looks like thru my glasses most day when it rains. Nice job Jon!!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 8 months ago:
Clyde,
Thanks! Very funny:-)
Jon
Ana (Ana Cortez) added a critique 8 months ago:
I actually like the flares at the top, but I am almost compelled to suggest cropping at the roof line, so none of the sky shows.
Not sure, though.
Aside from that, I think this really matches the theme, and I love how solitary he seems.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) said 8 months ago:
Ana,
Thanks for your thoughts on this one - I think cropping at the roof line is not a bad idea, and would add some drama to the shot.
Jon

by ErikUnger
3 comments
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) said 8 months ago:
I personally like this, however, I can see how others may not feel the same way. It is very manipulated and stylized, hence why it is under the topic photmanipulation. When working with the image, I could not think of a better way to capture and emphasize the subject. I just like the grunge and the color. Otherwise it just felt like a snapshot that many other tourist have most likely taken when walking by. I would love to hear what others think? Too dark? Too shadowy? Too everything?
selaux (Sarah) said 8 months ago:
Love the grime and the color. Also the backdrop is perfect. Dont think it's TOO anything!
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) said 8 months ago:
Thanks. I've had mixed reports about it. Some people don't know what it is when first looking at it. It's a fog sculpture from a local garden.

by selaux
8 comments
smucha (shannon mucha) added a critique 8 months ago:
Very creepy. Perhaps a bit more contrast would make the shot more effective. Nice composition
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
Creepy subject, very interesting and imaginative camera angle. The exposure is blown out and the composition is cramped on the right.
jorgelopez (Jorge López) added a critique 8 months ago:
UUUAAAAUUUU Great!!! I´m sure thre´s a story behind it. Great!!!
guczo (Attila Balogh) added a critique 8 months ago:
Creepy.. I'd cut the top though down to the doll's forehead.
selaux (Sarah) said 8 months ago:
Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the ideas!

by chefron
12 comments
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 1 year ago:
A pesar de que me encanta la toma la encuentro un poco oscura quizá demasiada saturación. El color rojo es impactante.
Saludos
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 1 year ago:
wow, that color is intense!
turkana (César) added a critique 1 year ago:
A mí la saturación y el enorme contraste de los colores hacen que me guste mcuho esta foto.
Gran toma
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 9 months ago:
I think the red may be a bit too itense...but it still is a great photo!
CouCou33 (Ingrid) added a critique 9 months ago:
Thanks for uploading the original :-)
It's crazy what one can do with post processing !
Nice job.
But I agree on the building and the red being too saturated.
It nicely fit the topic though ;-)

by kevincharlie
7 comments
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 1 year ago:
Soft and eerie. I like. He seems to be in the middle of saying something or like hes about to laugh. He has a look in his eyes.
kseniaC (ksenia) added a critique 1 year ago:
this photo really has a lot of feeling in it, its almost as if the picture is alive. Its a great shot, although i think it might be a little more effective with sharper focus. But the lighting is perfect! Overall a really great shot!
CyberCarsten (Carsten) added a critique 1 year ago:
A selfportrait full of expression. Works well in B&W, but I think the upper part of the face is really blown out (pure white) - too strong an effect I think.
Ludimaginary (Richard Vantielcke) added a critique 11 months ago:
Nice frame and composition but a bit too blurry I guess (the eyes for example)...
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Overexposed and out of focus - comp is interesting and good.
Best,
Jon

by selaux
12 comments
blaze883r (Fernando Bordallo) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with willie901. I think a darker background (a little bit) would work better, giving more importance to the cross.
But I like it! ;)
Sonoma added a critique 1 year ago:
Awesome shot. I love this one. I don't think it's overdone, I bet it came out just as you had envisioned it. Nice job!
selaux (Sarah) said 1 year ago:
Thanks All!!
dougoperzedek added a critique 1 year ago:
Love the color, love the texture. the leaves on the ground especially draw me in. I would love to see this piece animate in some way.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Excellent post processing, in my opinion. Very strong image.
Best,
Jon

by daldao
4 comments
Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:
Hello daldao, in all the cases, your subject is interesting. For me, I am obstructed by the over-exposure of the panels on the door. I think that behind the squares that could have been good. Concerning framing, I would have tried in the axis of the door with a little withdrawal (if that is possible…) I miss a little clearness for better emphasizing the matter. Many criticisms, it is often easier to say than to make… Greetings.
daldao said 1 year ago:
Actually i upload the wrong picture. This one was a test. In the other hand, original also has the panels of the door a little bit over exposed.
Thanks for your comment, i learned a lot.
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 1 year ago:
I love the dirtiness. Im a fan of this one. I do almost wish it were a little off center though. A different angle may add even more interest!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:
I agree with Sarah - it's very gritty and pretty at the same time. I also think Eric is right about the overexposed doors. All in all, however, - a fine shot.
Best,
jon

by rvercesi
9 comments
pageextent (matt mangan) added a critique 1 year ago:
I love the contrast of emotion. You move from the girl with her emotional intensity to a beautiful quiet street scene in the back that is nicely blurred. Great shot!
matt
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 1 year ago:
I think this one would work great in urban art too!
I love the colors and how i feel like i am walking down this street. Where was this taken?
rvercesi (Ricardo Vercesi) said 1 year ago:
This was taken in Lisbon at Bairro Alto. It is a neighborhood known for its nightlife and culturally very active, with art schools, bars, shops, restaurants and discos. Hence the puzzle of posters on the wall.
rvercesi (Ricardo Vercesi) said 1 year ago:
Thank you all.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:
Wonderful shot - instant fave!
Cheers,
Jon
Just had to sneak in a picture of my favorite baby in town. Looks good in my portfolio too, right? Yeah, i take a mean baby pic!