You are not logged in | Login

User selaux / Critiques / Photo #30682

Uploaded by selaux - 5 comments - Topic: Rural Life (5 months ago)  


Copyright © selaux (Sarah)
Unauthorized reproduction not permitted.

In Topic

Rural Life (5 months ago)  

User Comments

sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 5 months ago:

The scene gives me a nice feeling: at the end of the day, just relax and enjoy the view.

However, I think the whole scene is to dark and the high-tension power cables (and towers) are distracting me. I would zoom in/focus more on the watertower and granary (I'm not known with farmer-life, maybe the building are something diffrent, but you know what I mean).

GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 5 months ago:

I agree that it is a bit dark. I don't think that you'll be able to find a better photo by cropping out the power lines because that would mean you lose the sky and the top of the silo. I have two different copping ideas. 1) Crop off the right half of the photo, so that the power line tower is "hidden" at the very right edge of the photo. 2) Try cropping out 2/3 of the large tree on the left, crop out 2/3 of the short grass on the bottom of the frame, and crop off the top of the power tower so that it exits the frame.

Last resort: go back to take the photo again and hide the tower behind the silo :)

sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 5 months ago:

... or let it disapear with some cloning

www.edelsmidhansmulder.nl/Sufkipje/3a6b897824da839...

(takes less time then go back to this place, unless you made this photo out of your own window :) )

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:

I think all you need to do is to walk 5 or 6 paces to your right to get the electricity tower out from behind the silo. Then work with the color correction a little to give more depth to the tonal range and maybe try to pull a little more color into the sky.

op_perrin (Olivier Perrin) added a critique 5 months ago:

je suis assez d'accord avec les remarques de Beamer.

You could comment on this photo if you were logged in.