Looks a bit crowded to me. Maybe you should have taken some more distance. I would change the anle, too: OR right in front of it, OR more to the right. I like the structure and colour of the old bricks. Maybe you can make a detailed photo of those?

I had the exact same thought as Tamara as soon as I looked at the picture: it does feel crowded. All the elements (the door, the windows) are too close to the edge and there is no breathing room in the photo. There are definitely some interesting textures and things in the photo. Maybe a detail would be the way to go. Or just pull back further, if the scene lends itself to it.

Thank you both for the detailed feedback very helpful and and will try a re-crop!

l'idée est bonne et le sujet aussi. juste je trouve le cadrage trop centré et dommage que la grille sur la droite soit coupée.

I agree. There are great lines, textures and colors here - a different angle and focusing on one aspect of it would be a great way to take advantage of those things.

I find the elements in this shot hugely interesting on their own, particularly the door (great colour and interesting timber surround). If you can, it would be interesting to revisit this site and play with different elements because together it is not as strong as the parts. Oh, the technical aspects of the shot are fine (exposure etc), it looks like a great place to play with different compositions.